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EDITS HAVE BEEN MADE. There were a few points on your very, very kind review, yrclever, that I disagreed with, but otherwise it was extremely helpful. Thank you so much!

First off, thanks for reviewing. =) Hello! Here as you asked! :D Wow. This was interesting! I loved the bird part and the characters were funny but a wee bit ...

Title: The Court of Gilded Birds Genre: Fantasy Link:

Noooo. D: Decisions, decisions. I was sure I wanted to do fiction but now I'm wondering if I shouldn't try poetry instead AND two of the creative writing ones sound ...

Likewise! Do you know which workshop you want to go to?

You should read this: It's a steampunk novel and it has a lot of the traditional elements of steampunk in it, at least for the first half. It's also brilliant.

Why do you need to have the bus ride turn out to not be real? It just seems... excessive, and, as you say, trite. It's not necessary, if what you ...

I'd appreciate a review for the beginning of my fantasy novel, The Court Of Gilded Birds:

I most certainly will. You've been v. v. helpful. =]

Session 1 also! =D Congratulations to you too - I guess I'll be seeing you there! Which workshop are you doing?

It's interesting, but the detached voice left me a little blank. I'd probably read on; not hugely gripping, as a start, but mildly intriguing and well-written enough. Might try to ...

Name (tasteful names please): Inez Santiago Age(11-21): 19 DNA shared with: crow Gender: female Appearance: Inez is what the generous might call a handsome young woman with ashen skin, hair ...

(Reserving a mutated teenager spot, if there are any left. Also: would it be possible to play both a scientist and a teenager? Pretty please? *makes like a puppy dog ...

~Mallory~ "Sorry, sir," said the guard, stiffly; he was already moving after his partner. Mallory sighed; he hadn't intended to be so rude himself - the guard was, after all, ...

;) Fortunately you can't read thoughts. At least... I hope? XD For Mallory's sake, poor man?